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Anonymousover 6 years agoYearning
This was erotic and beautiful. I really loved he descriptions about touching her breasts and the elusive nipple trying to escape. I enjoy your writing style throughout although the last chapter could have used a little more description while he was pleasuring his lady orally.
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