All Comments on 'Antonia'

It sure is a good plot but kind of need a follow on part.

Nice story, if a little predictable. A surgeon with his education probably wouldn't refer to her tits and slit. Still gave it 5 stars.

Not bad, starts in an interesting manner but quickly becomes mundane. Needs to have a sequel or two

I, too, would like to see more. They’re clearly going to end up together, but in her world or his? 5 stars today, and eagerly anticipating Ch 2.

Very nice story but definitely needs a part two.

Ditto, good but has an unfinished feel. Thanks for what you wrote regardless.

Loved it. Agree that it needs another chapter.

Nice. " I could see the inner surfaces all but swimming in her secretions in anticipation of my intrusion." I know this is an erotica site, but sorry, that made me laugh and groan, took me out of it for a minute.

Wonderful story, and well told. 5*. A Part II would definitely be apprecited.

I really enjoyed this but agree that a follow up is needed.

Pt2!!!!!!!!

Beautiful story. Would love to read more of their adventures....

Part 2 please bring the old boyfriend back and let doc do his thing lol

The writing was great, as usual. The story line, however, was fairly standard (i.e., boy meets girl in an improbable fashion, they fall in love…this story stops there). So, it was a pleasant enough read, but not that moving.

Awesome start, very romantic. Needs a HEA though. 5/5

Very interesting story!

5

When I fug out it was a mob story, I almost stopped. Glad I didn't. Would lie 4-5 sequels, since it was short.

Oh, yeah! Forgot to rate. Hmm? 2 or 3? No! 2+3 !

Nice enough. Well written and understand the sentiments but sometimes felt and expected the ex to re-appear causing havoc or and attack on her family, neither of which materialised. I suppose the drama was at the beginning when Jeff operated on Antony. However still worthy of 5 ⛤

Romantic

So, why do we write romance stories? The mundane boy meets girl blah blah simply doesn't fly as a story. A LOT was said in this. Well done.

An enjoyable journey. The aggressive handling of the breasts always confuses me. l learned long ago to take your time and work up to it, unless they have implants, then they can't feel shit anyway.

Sweet, gentle love story.

As for the previous commenter who says romances "don't fly" as stories. All stories have merit, based on the value the writer imparts and the emotions the reader has invoked by the story. Yours, bleeep, are exceptional! There's no "blah, blah, blah" here. Just a truly heartfelt story, well thought out, and presented well. I'll go with my usual 5 stars, thank you. KUDOS!

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Que Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

Romance stories are great.

Try 'Nightingale' another great one.

A Very Enjoyable read, I Was CAPTIVATED !

THANK YOU !

Excellent story really enjoyed reading it very captivating.

Enjoyed it thanks

For Romantics: Well worth the read!!!!!