All Comments on 'Any - and Everything Pt. 01 Ch. 01'

Well it's kinda hard to form a real opinion, from just a few pages.

Buuut I am a little intrigued as to where you are going with the story, so I gave you three stars and we'll see where things stand after the next chapter.

Also as a side note, if someone decides to insult you for your writing. That is not really constructive criticism now is it, so if anymore comments appear take the fawning and constructive ones to heart and ignore the rest..

I really enjoyed it, even with the cliffhanger. Looking forward very much to the next part.

I hope you’re not like every other lot writer that does a genie story only to quit after 2 or 3 chapters…..

A good start. I liked the main character, as well as the different take on genies. Could use some minor editing, but overall good for your first story.

I agree with SecretBunny, it's tough to form an opinion from just what's here, I'm curious as to backstory for the MC to fill out his character some more. It does need some editing apart from the differences that arise from being a non-English native speaker. Not to mention having what I assume to be his love interest turn out to be a genie, I would imagine an entire chapter or two just from her point of view would be needed in order to provide the reader an idea of who she is. As well as giving time for some world building to establish the setting.

It was great!I. I plan to follow your writing.

Marty