by SandroTheLich
You've already come a long way with the writing. Still could use some more editing to tighten up the story but that's not really a major issue. Very hot scene, and it's good to have the genie's POV. Liking how you're building the tension and setting up the way forward. Looking forward to more.
I usually dont leave comments but You have the beginning of something great here, please continue the story. I hope that her new master asserts his ownership in a way that both protects her from people touching her magically or physically in any sexual undesired way. She seems like she craves that submission.