All Comments on 'Any - and Everything Pt. 01 Ch. 02'

by SandroTheLich

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SimplyJamesDSimplyJamesDalmost 2 years ago

You've already come a long way with the writing. Still could use some more editing to tighten up the story but that's not really a major issue. Very hot scene, and it's good to have the genie's POV. Liking how you're building the tension and setting up the way forward. Looking forward to more.

Nostalgic94Nostalgic94almost 2 years ago

I usually dont leave comments but You have the beginning of something great here, please continue the story. I hope that her new master asserts his ownership in a way that both protects her from people touching her magically or physically in any sexual undesired way. She seems like she craves that submission.

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07/07/2023 Hi everyone, I make this short message to apologize for the little break I have been taking from writing on Literotica. While I did not write much these past few months, I did thought about this story (andeven about some other stories that could pop out on my acco...