by SandroTheLich
Who is Jezebeth?
Was it not made clear at the beginning she is the mother of Eleanor?
Don't worry. All questions will meet their anwers when the time comes.
The first chapter had an interesting premise however it’s gotten worse from there. Everything seems to be happening at light speed with no real build up and no real character development, which you need in a fantasy story.
Please continue wrinting this story. It is trully unikue and has really good potention to go far far way ahead. Really easy to read and really nice plot. I liked it very much. Keep going :)