All Comments on 'Any - and Everything Pt. 01 Ch. 04'

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greg50greg50over 1 year ago

Who is Jezebeth?

Was it not made clear at the beginning she is the mother of Eleanor?

SandroTheLichSandroTheLichover 1 year agoAuthor

Don't worry. All questions will meet their anwers when the time comes.

NovemberComingFireNovemberComingFireover 1 year ago

The first chapter had an interesting premise however it’s gotten worse from there. Everything seems to be happening at light speed with no real build up and no real character development, which you need in a fantasy story.

greg72greg72about 1 year ago

Guess the writer has stopped writing

Ultimoter69Ultimoter69about 1 year ago

Awesome story can't wait for your next chapter

SDTRSDTR9 months ago

Please continue wrinting this story. It is trully unikue and has really good potention to go far far way ahead. Really easy to read and really nice plot. I liked it very much. Keep going :)

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I Really Really hope that you continue this stoy!! It's Truely top notch!

Havoc100Havoc100about 2 months ago

Due to your promise we can only assume you have died. Sorry to hear that.

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07/07/2023 Hi everyone, I make this short message to apologize for the little break I have been taking from writing on Literotica. While I did not write much these past few months, I did thought about this story (andeven about some other stories that could pop out on my acco...

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