All Comments on 'Anya Ch. 17'

It's good and you write well. It is also a good story line. Keep up the good work, I really have enjoyed all the chapters.

You do a pretty good job when you describe situations but I get the feeling that you try too hard and end up overdoing it. You use the same description over and over like you think we will forget the statement you made just a few words earlier. This causes the description to become redundent or of no consequence.

I really enjoyed this part. Please continue this story. I am very interested in seeing how this will continue. So many willing cunts:)