All Comments on 'Anya's Awakening Ch. 04: On the Train 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Good one.

Set in Japan?

merrySMmerrySMabout 2 years ago

His actions, a bit rushed. Tied her hands above her head? No one saw? Good story, needs some refining, good premise and you did move the story along. Keep writing.

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