All Comments on 'Anyone for Fishing?'

"Well to cut a long story short because I know you guys want to get to some action, after a great deal of conversation I learned he was just like me in many ways, but most important of all, he was gay." Alexcarr - this is SUPPOSED to be a story, you're not supposed to just 'cut it short'! That doesn't INVOLVE the reader much, does it? That's incredibly lazy writing and right there is where I stop reading.

you can see these two love each other so sex has to be great