All Comments on 'Anything for You'

Another superb story. Thank you.

Except for the piss part, very good. Erotic as hell.

Great story, really sweet. Hope you follow this up with them getting even crazier together.

Thank you everyone for the kind comments! @Anon - I know the piss part isn't to everyone's liking and I'm actually glad you still read the story and got some enjoyment out of it despite that part being included. I give you a lot of props for that. It's incredibly common that people find one kink or fetish they dislike in a story and instantly either stop reading or leave an angry comment or a 1-star review, despite my clear warnings and tags at the start of all my stories. As a writer, I want to push the envelope a little and include some niche fetishes in my stories at times that not everyone on the site dares to venture into, though of course I do some 'vanilla' stuff as well! But it's nice not to have to feel too restricted in the creative process, if that makes sense. Kudos!

This was probably the best story I've read in a LONG, LONG time. You clearly dedicated time to this and it was well worth it. So cute, so wild, so fantastic. Thank you for writing this, I loved every minute of it. Perhaps a Part 2? I would love to see that.

The only critique I would give is that the beginning goes on for a bit too long. I think the story could have started when Alric arrived at Sigrid's house and that would've been just fine.

Once again thank you, you're extremely talented. :D

Fantastic. Maybe throw in even more ATM for the next one? Thanks for writing!!

Wow, should have heeded your warning. No vote on my part because most of the subject matter wasn't to my liking, but your storytelling is quite good.

I would have liked to see the naughty stuff be less one-sided…

@Anon - Care to elaborate on what you mean by one-sided? Both of the characters definitely got some enjoyment out of each scenario that transpired, and although they were mostly fulfilling Alric's fantasies, he did go down on Sigrid and gave her pleasure as well. What would you have liked to see being done differently? I am very open to criticism but it's important I understand what you mean. Thank you!

Ok so;The major part rather main part of the story i.e sex was upto the mark, the descriptions, phrases etc was great, I don't mind with pee thing as well coz ig it's people's fetish and to each his own. So the main part was brilliantly amazing no doubt about it. Also kudos two your story-"telling" skill.

But what makes erotics diff from porn is the logical and better stories. And tbh the story wasn't upto the mark, compared to how good smut part was. The characters especially were very very vague. I wouldn't have even written any comment coz I don't, but because you took efffort and wrote freaking 5 pages I couldn't help but comment. So the female Sigrid was, sorry to say very very lame. It was a typical boy fantasy girl which does not exxist. I understand hopeless romantics, I'm one, but she had no life. All this would have made sense if she was a slave or prisoners, it made no sense for friend rather best friend. No such person exists irp. Now if this girl was some fantasy then all squared but if the story wasn't in fantasy then sorry. Also till the end it felt as if the boy was vulnerable from break up, needed to take out his frustration so he used her ntg more; again bringing out the point that it would have sounded so better with a slave/prisoner. Now as a good critic here are my suggestions 1. The part where she said "date" or "what I don't have" can be removed so as to give story depth. 2. There was no need to use the L words on the first night. 3. The first night could have been just comforting and then basic sex BW friends. Then you could have said after more such sessions they felt liking started dating and then the boy opened up onto telling his fetishes and then the two completing them. This will make the story more grounded.

Besides ik submissive is a thing but it refers to sexual submisivtiy not submitting your life to someone, coz that makes story less interesting.

Just for reference your own story bed intruder had a sub girl but she never felt useless. Would surely advise you to look upon her while writing sub girls!

Thanks and Cheers,

Also de have rated you good😊

Ok so;The major part rather main part of the story i.e sex was upto the mark, the descriptions, phrases etc was great, I don't mind with pee thing as well coz ig it's people's fetish and to each his own. So the main part was brilliantly amazing no doubt about it. Also kudos two your story-"telling" skill.

But what makes erotics diff from porn is the logical and better stories. And tbh the story wasn't upto the mark, compared to how good smut part was. The characters especially were very very vague. I wouldn't have even written any comment coz I don't, but because you took efffort and wrote freaking 5 pages I couldn't help but comment. So the female Sigrid was, sorry to say very very lame. It was a typical boy fantasy girl which does not exxist. I understand hopeless romantics, I'm one, but she had no life. All this would have made sense if she was a slave or prisoners, it made no sense for friend rather best friend. No such person exists irp. Now if this girl was some fantasy then all squared but if the story wasn't in fantasy then sorry. Also till the end it felt as if the boy was vulnerable from break up, needed to take out his frustration so he used her ntg more; again bringing out the point that it would have sounded so better with a slave/prisoner. Now as a good critic here are my suggestions 1. The part where she said "date" or "what I don't have" can be removed so as to give story depth. 2. There was no need to use the L words on the first night. 3. The first night could have been just comforting and then basic sex BW friends. Then you could have said after more such sessions they felt liking started dating and then the boy opened up onto telling his fetishes and then the two completing them. This will make the story more grounded.

Besides ik submissive is a thing but it refers to sexual submisivtiy not submitting your life to someone, coz that makes story less interesting.

Just for reference your own story bed intruder had a sub girl but she never felt useless. Would surely advise you to look upon her while writing sub girls!

Thanks and Cheers, btw rated you

5 stars. I found her infatuation sweet. The whole workup with dinner and her running around was spot on and the sex in the second half was nicely done. I did feel the transition between friend and sex doll a little fast. Her grabbing his phone was unexpected.

I've read similar stories so I was expecting Alric to complain how his ex never wanted to do anything kinky with him steeling her resolve to be the sex doll he wanted. But he went from heartbroken to decidedly in love with his Sigrid, and even though he affirmed his feelings to her repeatedly, I didn't quite buy them from him.

Overall I enjoyed it though so I'm going to go see what else you have written!

New and improved version uploaded. The story is exactly the same, but I have improved the language and pacing a little bit, and highlighted the emotional state of the two characters slightly more. Also corrected a number of misspelled words. It's still far from perfect, but it's in a better state now. Just wanted to keep readers updated in case they were curious about the re-upload!

I don't what the previous version was but this one is bombastic! Makes me feel better. 5/5

Too good Man, you did a wonderful & wonderful job. The story have the perfect pace & the perfect transitions. Loved it Man. Deserves more than 5❤️

For the most part I really liked the story. Characters are endearing and the plot plausible.

But it’s quite apparent that you’ve never engaged in first time anal sex. Having an oversized cock worked into a virgin asshole with little effort and only vaginal juices as lubrication? Not improbable: impossible. I understand that it may disrupt the flow of the story to have him find some lube, take the time to gape her with an increasing number of fingers or smaller toys, but that doesn’t give you license to invent a fantastical deflowering that could not occur. You might as well give her a talking dog, as well.

Other than that disruptive fantasy it was a fun story. I’m not particularly into waterworks, but at least you portrayed that kink in a realistic manner.

@Rapierwit24601 - No, I just think that when writing erotic fiction there's thing you skip for the reader's benefit. If every story that included anal sex would go through the lengthy process of preparing for it, making sure she's clean, and so on.. It would just disrupt the flow of the story, and so many of them would feel similar. I've written several stories like that already. As an author, I wanted to create a unique sex scene. I feel like that added more value than increased realism. I mean, how far do you want us writers to take it? Should every woman go pee before having sex to avoid getting an urinary tract infection? Should they always wear condoms in every story with a stranger since STI's are a huge concern otherwise? Should almost no women have an orgasm during their first time? Most authors skip over these parts because they take away from the eroticism for most readers. I'm sorry that it felt like one step too short for you, but I can't please everybody. In my universe, that cock fit perfectly, and she loved it. ;)

Fantastic story! Just the right blend of romance and kink. Excellent job!

Awesome story. The dialogue is so well written - it made for such a great read.