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All Comments on 'Anything The Heart Wants Pt. 01'

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muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Hard to see the point of making Margie a slut right off by fucking the moving man?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hot

JacktacularJacktacularover 1 year ago

Gotta agree with muskboy it makes you see her as the always cheating whore from a LW story.

Rob_McCall4Rob_McCall4over 1 year agoAuthor

Jacktacular, thank you for your comment. Please read the other parts. She has a lust for life.

Ravus_SapiensRavus_Sapiensover 1 year ago

I'm not sure what the point of the scene with the moving man was...? Also, some indication of whose POV we're seeing would be nice.

But apart from that, decent start of the story. * * *

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I have to agree with the other comments, the story is nice except for her fucking the moving guy. and you "lust for life" comment doesn't make any sense. That scene just make her a slut.

SniperkingSniperking3 months ago

The moving man scene was unnecessary in my opinion.

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