All Comments on 'Anything You Want Ch. 01-05'

by Br0kenD0ll

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PtmcPilotPtmcPilotabout 1 month ago

An interesting premise, and I’m eager to see where this goes. And for the sex as well.

chipmonk9chipmonk9about 1 month ago

Different from most stories keep it up

seittitgibseittitgibabout 1 month ago

Looks very interesting, can't wait for more.

Sometimes instead of saying Matthew, it said Michael btw.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

There's no point in including chapters if they are only paragraphs.

Qwer12Qwer12about 1 month ago

Great start. Well played and well developed. Ready for more. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymous27 days ago

This story has so much potential! I hope you continue working on it!

AnonymousAnonymous18 days ago

You may have misspelled mind control as "maind control" in the tags. Love your work

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