All Comments on 'Aparna and the birthday gift.'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Please continue

Please continue the story make Aparna naked infront of her dad and brother

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Excellent read

Good story

mallupervmallupervabout 4 years ago
Keep 'em coming!

Loved how you wrote it from Aparna's perspective. You are equally good at both. Keep the stories coming. Big fan here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Excellent part

Loved it ..

cutelittlemuffincutelittlemuffinabout 4 years ago
So good...

Loved it. Felt pretty much realistic. Please continue writing. I love the exhibitionism theme in Kerala.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

Simply amazing story, it plays like a movie, it has a well thought out plot with surprising twists that are connected to earlier story elements, anyone who reads patiently is rewarded at the end. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Keep on writing please more next part or story please what happens next their risk appetite had increased looking forward to read more from you

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