All Comments on 'Apartment 303'

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Oh my! This is good, real good. Well-rounded and well-written characters, alternately fizzing with imaginative dialogue and pure sexy filth.

Charlie is perfection for me. A bit nerdy, arty and literate but scandalously rude. The library scene was exceptionally hot :)

I might have even left the final scene out, but top marks!

First story!

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Good story and I hope you continue the story of their lives. I did deduct a point for the pegging which too me is extreme and ruined the erotic mood I was in. To each his own

One of he best stories ever. Congratulations. You should be proud.

How do you top this.

Excellent story with fun characters. The last scenes got a bit overwhelming, but that's mostly due to coordinating 4 people's movement using only text. Good character development, and I liked how we found out what was going on as Kelly did.

I hope the next chapter includes the idea of compersion, which is being happy for somebody I love having a good time apart from me. It's like the opposite of jealousy. If you're looking for a proofreader/editor, lmk. I've been practicing ENM (Ethical Non Monogamy) for about 5 years, and I'll tell you it can work with honesty and Communication. Great stuff, especially impressive for a first entry. -y4

This is a riveting drama, with excellent characters and sizzling love scenes, beautifully written by the author. There is real depth to the story as well, and it all adds up to a Five Stars story of rare quality.

If you enjoyed my story, there is a sequel, and an in-universe side story. They can be found in my profile. I suggest reading The Executive, then The End of Apartment 303. Cheers!

Amazing story! I haven't read many stories recently that have the depth of plot and characters as what you've produced here. I was just like Kelly, so engaged in the sex and secrecy that I didn't see the foreshadowing of the ladies conspiring behind his back. However, once the game was revealed, all the clues from throughout the story fell into place. Well done! I came here after reading the executive, and now I can't wait to see what Erin and the apartment gang will get up to. 5*

I loved this story. A sequel (with Cam, too) would be wonderful. 5/5

Wow. What an amazing, excellent story, one of the very best on this site. Really enjoyed it.

@SteveWallace There is a sequel, The End of Apartment 303. You're welcome ;P