All Comments on 'Apartment Sex'

short but sweet with a cute type ending dialogue. Keep it up.

Short and sweet. Perhaps a "prequel" to hash out how all this started?

The ...pace ...was ...very ...robotic ...and ...cryptic!

Slow it down - describe more - what do they see, feel, react. Your core is fine - expand the imagination, paint the picture!

Liked it a lot.

Fuck the naysayers, I loved it!

Maybe another chapter with a little story line.

She had just come from fucking one of her regulars (she had two).

"I am going to give Robert back his key. I don't need him anymore." she told her brother.

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So, what about the other guy? Is she going to be faithful to her brother and break up with both of them? 🤔

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I gave you a 5/5. I realize that you intended this to be a quick one and done, but the story is juicy enough that it begs for a series of chapters. Very hot. 🔥