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BigDave999BigDave999over 1 year ago

Great story, very short compared to your others.

Hopefully there's a sequel.

Dying for a sequel to Rage..

JAFCritic3JAFCritic3over 1 year ago

Exceptional work! While I would love to see more of this story, it was very well written. Thank you for sharing

nestorb30nestorb30over 1 year ago

5 stars especially for the :

"C'apn-"

CRUNCH!

Sl33pingforestSl33pingforestover 1 year ago

Need more of this lol

mharrisonmharrisonover 1 year ago

Great story - fully agree with the previous comments.

Many thanks for sharing with us all.

DocHoliday69DocHoliday69over 1 year ago

Short, but has me so hopelessly excited for part 4 of trolling paradise, cannot wait

SorchakSorchakover 1 year ago

Just one thing: it's supposed to be Cap'n, not C'apn. You know, the shortened form of Captain? That's what the apostrophe is for.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 1 year ago

"C'apn-"

CRUNCH!

Perfect, if a Quaker eating oats comes into play.

Nouh_BdeeNouh_Bdeeover 1 year ago

I am amazed at how well-written this is, and how much feels packed into such a short story!

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