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Click hereDespite it all she was blissfully ignorant of the downright pornographic display she was giving him. Feeling the bed spring up and down behind her she turned her head to see what he was up to. This was just in time to see him knelt behind her with one hand lining up his cock with her slit. It wasn't however in time to prepare for the intense wave of pleasure that wracked her body when he lunged forward. His hips smacked wetly against her ass as he plunged every inch of his excited steel hard cock deep inside her in one powerful body spasming thrust.
"Oooooh! Slut likes!" She screamed, not quite being able to form proper utterances right then.
"Yeah baby? Does my gorgeous little cum-slut like getting fucked by my big cock?" He growled.
"Yes sir!" She squealed.
Jamie reached down to grasp the long heels of her shoes, lifting her feet from the bed and jackhammering his cock in and out of her mercilessly. Since she'd started cumming around his cock five minutes ago and showed no signs of stopping Jamie let go of his building climax. Immediately she felt stream after stream of his cum start flooding her ravenous pussy. The intense climaxes shook her to her very core and she started screaming his name again and again. Loving every moment of it the gorgeous mother was surfing cloud nine for a full ten minutes before coming back down to earth again. When she did she realised that she was once again cuddled up in his arms on some very messy sheets.
"Welcome back" He said, smiling down at her. "I thought you were ready to call it a night there."
"Mmmm, not on your life! Though I think if we do that again straight away I might black out or something from the high." She nuzzled herself in against his side and slipped one of her legs over him. "How about you go get coffee?"
"How about you go get coffee? I can't feel my legs at the minute. Just yours I'm happy to say." He said as his hand came to rest on her knee and stroked its way up along her thigh.
"Ok we can do without coffee right now. I think we should order a pizza or..."
The door buzzer rang.
Jamie let out a rather irritated sigh. "That'll be the neighbours complaining. Next time I'm gagging you and tying you to the headboard." He threatened whilst rolling out of her arms and off the side of the bed.
"Promises, promises." She said whilst turning on her side to face him and stroking the bed sheets invitingly. Perhaps too invitingly he admitted since he was now seriously considering ignoring the door buzzer.
His conscience got the better of him however as he snagged a towel to wrap around his waist. The door buzzer rang again.
"Coming!" He shouted.
"All over the place!" Sonya added.
Jamie had to stifle a rather strong laugh at that. She'd sure come a long way from the shy, reserved archaeology tutor he'd known only two days ago. After securing the towel he walked around the bed and over to the door. Holding down the locking mechanism he twisted the door knob to peek around the edge of the door at who it was.
Gwendolyn Chambers was stood there bracing herself upright with her hands on both sides of the doorway. Her long auburn hair was loose and wild rather than set in the bun he'd seen it in earlier. Those exotic Latin features formed an expression that was a cross between desire and frustration. Her suit had gone save for the large white shirt he assumed was the same one as she was wearing earlier. The hand that braced her against the door wasn't that far from his face and he swore he could smell her sex-juices on her fingers. Glancing over her over properly now, he could make out the lines of a black bra beneath the thin white cotton shirt. She was leaning forward a little so he couldn't make out if she was wearing panties or not through the curtain the shirt provided. Her legs were still covered in her dark stockings held up by a slinky black garter belt that vanished up beneath the shirt. She was breathing heavily too as if she'd just been for a run.
He took only a second to let his eyes drink in the sight of the slightly ruffled woman.
"Gwen? Oh hey look sorry about all the noise. I-ah...we'll try to keep a little quieter." He apologized but the woman simply started at him with a smouldering gaze.
"Is...um...Is there anything else you'd like?" He asked in the kindest tone he was able to muster. Maybe she wanted the damn sugar or something?
"I'd like you to make me scream like her whilst you fuck my pussy raw." She replied a little breathlessly.
"There is definitely a god," Jamie thought."...and her name is Allison."
Authors Note: Thanks for all the feedback and the help I've gotten with the first part of Aphrodisia. I'm glad you guys liked it and it means a lot to me as a new writer that you did. Hope you like this one too! I got a few requests asking for the second part ASAP so I've posted it here after only one proofread. Therefore there might be some errors here and there because of that and if so I apologise in advance. The next part will take a little longer to write I imagine and before I do I'll have edited and checked parts one and two properly. If you have any questions about the story then wing me some feedback, otherwise constructive criticism and general feedback are still greatly appreciated.
- COMMENTS
Makehandparty21 days agoHoly Buckets!!! I would love it if I were Jamie, the High Priest of Love! However improbable this story maybe, it warms my heart and makes me happy to read!
Wargamer9 months agoFantastic story.
I put off reading this for a while, sorry l did so. This is so good. Cannot wait to read on.
Scores 5/5
NovaM10 months agoSo steamy, owch, just burned my umm, fingers. More, more, mooooore, please 🧚🏼♀️
Okay, I’ve got to stop reading now and get some things done before the end of this day, 🤓😉😏
5 🌠
Aussie1951about 1 year agoCan’t wait to see how many women he ends up with and how many he knocks up if any. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Anonymousabout 1 year agoIt is a good story - attached to a good story-teller, too !
However, it might need a better English - as well as a (more) careful syntax... However, while the plot was well chosen and the characters carefully defined, it would be a pity to diminish the pleasure of reading the story by simply neglecting the form ,,, And it has enough potential to justify a whole series of short-stories, too !
Anonymousabout 1 year agoDear Lien thank you so much for this lovely exciting and well-written story xxx
maddictover 1 year agoGwen, what were you waiting for ? I hope you get a taste of the Man gravy !
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Anonymousover 1 year agoOOOHHH...You have given ideas to other readers, and their wives/girlfriends...even get them to describe how they are!! Sssooo nasty...I really appreciate all of that!! The author should know how good his work is because of that feedback!!
"Allison"...Sonya...and Gwendolyn...this is truly a magnificent tale...the sex is good and 🔥 hot, Gwen is gonna be an excellent addition to this group...her showing up half-dressed like that, all hot and bothered and gathered-up, she is ready for Jamie to breed her too!
All-around too-good a story, moving on to next chapter...
Five**5**Stars...🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🌋🌋🌋🌋🌋
MADDOGINTEXAS
xhristianjalmost 2 years agoYou have to wonder how British Guys ever knock up anyone it's like they're the opposite of virile more like virulent?!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agomy wife of three months is also loud and a cum squirter,sometimes she stands over me and rubs her pussy till she squirts in my mouth and face, i love eating her and letting her squirt directly in my mouth, she is still so tight that when i stroke into her cunt , when she cums she squirts out past my cock and soaks my groin. what a girl....
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoHow much precum is that? He better get checked, I think he's blown out a testicle valve.
I've really noticed that a whole lot of women with the very best legs and asses tend to have smallish boobs. Sonya seems this way, very sweet!
Nice work, I love it!
GoldFinger578over 6 years agoYou sir have given my girlfriend so many bad idea just from 2 chapters. I love this series so much. I did see some minor grammar mistakes but I'm not going to harp on them. They were overshadowed by how good this is. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Anonymousover 6 years agoBreathtaking and beyond other stories that lack the power and emotional dimension of sexuality. You have a gift.You must continue as your readers are enraptured and need more to continue everymans dream. Trurobeachcomber
Anonymousover 7 years agoWho would've thought that someone would complain about simple mind control on a story with the mind control tag.
Anonymousover 9 years agoHi,
Please do a search and replace on 'reign' for rein.
Thanks for sharing!
JP
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoBoyfriend and I read this together and it inspired some seriously good fucking. Thank you!!!!
talldarkfellowabout 11 years agoI enjoyed the characters and the enthusiastic "super" sex between Jamie and Sonya. And I can even buy Jamie's new power, as granted by Allison. The problem is Jamie's casual brainwashing of the two lesbian teen's parents. I don't think you can agonize about being a good guy in regards to possibly forcing women to have sex with you, then simply twist people's mind and basic beliefs because you are an atheist and you think their ideas are wrong.
Look, I know most people who come to Literotca have given up on traditional religious views of sex, but this is about basic freedom of thought. Alter that by magical or other means rather than convincing arguement, no matter how much "good" you think you are doing, and nobody's beliefs are safe.
Risaxalmost 12 years agoGather round children, because it's time for another freakishly long comment by Risax.
First of I really liked the way Jamie and Allison just conversed while sitting/floating in the clouds, and it kind of reminded me of the personal realm Karina (or was it Katrina?) goes to in the Pervikar stories by JohnEvans, only with less pink. (and I guess it's fitting considering who Allison is.)
I'd also like to tell you that most of your characters are likeable, well except for the vilainous characters that appear in your stories but they usually get their come up-ins, but back to what I wanted to say.
Jamie is a likeable guy because he's dorky, and a bit clueless, which I think a lot of people can relate to. (though I know he becomes more of a bad-ass sex-god later on. Which I can't relate to. :P)
Anyway, I really enjoyed the conversation between Allison and Jamie it brought a chuckle from me on occasion.
And it raised some questions I had back when I first read it, the really important ones about Allison and what she is.
Sonya's history was especially...interesting.
(With which I mean that her college boyfriend's a prick.)
I also liked the little infor about Jamie's powers, and the fact that Allison tells him to use it wisely. (Well, that's what I gathered from the "Just please don't be an asshole about it." anyway.)
Ha! And again you made me laugh with Jamie's reactions when he woke up disoriented and confused...and then you make me jealous as soon as Sonya arrived. The outfit you decided to make her wear was very fitting, seeing as Jamie commented on her having a great pair of legs and a fine ass to boot.
(Or something along those lines, I was distracted.)
And her new attitude is definitly a plus too, she isn't a slutty sex-kitten like the night before in Chapter one, but I quite like how she teases and flirts with Jamie.
Hot damn! The blowjob Jamie recieved from Sonya in the morning sure was intense though! Plus, what followed was great as well, albeit a bit short. (I loved the comment Jamie made about Sonya's soaked shorts, as well as having her invite him to fuck her again by wiggling her ass.)
But back to the plot, which is no less interesting.
The fact that Sonya, and the women that will appear later, also recieve some powers and their bodies improve really interests me, and I really wonder where you will take it. But more interesting is how Jamie can read minds now, and I certainly liked how he used it to calm Sonya. (I admit that I was worried the first time I read the chapter when Sonya mentioned her kids, and how Jamie would handle it.)
Seriously though, one of the highlights of this Chapter has to be Jamie breaking Clarence's jaw. It was awesome the first time I read it, and it still is.
If I have said it before, then I say it again.
I friggin' love Allison.
Even though I still (vaguely) remember some of the things she is capable of, she remains an enigma and the conversations between her and Jamie are always fun in some way. (and having her expand a bit upon what Jamie is capable is always interesting.)
First of all, the display of Jamie's new power was very interesting and very...sweet for the lack of a manlier word. :P
And second of all, I like how Jamie and Sonya handled Gwen's situation, and despite all the crap she's been through she still managed to make me laugh when she (mentally) commented on Jamie's ass.
Naturaly, the sex scenes you wrote were fantastic.
From Sonya's new outfit, to Jamie licking her pussy and fucking to them both practically passing out from climaxing like crazy.
But my favorite thing had to be the dialogue that followed it, especialy to the point were Jamie is about to answer the door to their room.
And speaking of that, the first time I read it and Gwen appeared, was a nice surprise. The second time round wasn't quite so surprising, but still quite nice.
And finally, thanks for your e-mail and advice.
I already read plenty, more English language books than Dutch one, and I do feel like reading a lot has helped me. But the tips about how to plan out your story are gold, because I have often started stories but because I really didn't know how to end them, or simply continue them, I ended up abandoning them.
Except more feedback in the future!
Anonymousover 12 years agoI thought that the first chapter was good, but it pales in comparison to this one.
The dialogue between Sonya and Jamie are hot and sexy, with some sweet moments and some funny bits as well.
And I loved the last pieces of dialogue
