by silverwingeddemon
You're off to a good start it seems.
This story begs for a sequel...
I love everything about this story so far. The setting is so great. Technology suddenly killing everyone and how the world has to adapt from that? Just wow. And your character development is amazing too. Great job!
Don’t hold us hanging; the sequel almost writes itself.
His second choice will have to face the reluctant choice of being protected by a decent guy or being community property in the barracks.
Given that it’s the sister of the first choice.... it might take some persuasion BY her sister.
I am commenting a bit late in the game but I also enjoyed this a lot. It was a bit rough but the characters were not flat and the idea has a lot of potential.
I also hope you decide to continue this.
Thanks