by Dray26
Wow!! What an amazing series of beautiful writing. Such talent and that surprise at the end with her two rudimentary paintings of "What Comes Around" and "Goes Around" was a work of art in itself. You have a gift! Continue to share it with us. You just became my favorite author.
I am so flattered by your compliment. I realize that most readers are not on this site to explore and enjoy plots, so i greatly appreciate the comments regarding my writing style. I hope to continue writing interesting stories that just happen to include a bit of sex interwoven into the tale. Thanks again for taking the time to comment!
Brilliant work! You've hidden a true thriller inside an erotic romance story with very well-developed characters and a believable and smoothly progressing plot. You should really think about posting in the novella section where the readers are much more accepting of little erotica and hungry for a lot of plot. Really enjoyed your writing.
Lovely, just lovely. Thank you, it's so hard to find something with a good plot and erotica. Enjoyable work.