All Comments on 'Apple of My Eye'

This is the sweetest story I ever read and I loved it...kudos to the author u did a wonderful job

This story has left me all soft and gooey inside!!! I love it.I love it.I love it!!!If this doen't win the contest I dont know what will !!!!!!!

HINT: another seven pages of their life will not be inappropriate LOL!!

You should start another category called sweet romance cos this surpasses all the romance stories in this site.I even forgot about him being a wolf part

HINT: The second part(7pages long too) Can focus on the wolfie life,but no witches or vamps pls!!!!

great love story was very sweet and endearing thank you for posting it and good luck with the contest

Just in time for valentine's Day, you give us a very heart felt romance. And although Wade is also wolf, it didn't read as a normal nonhuman story. The fear Amara had at being stocked and the "drastic" solution to it could easily have been torn from any front page paper and no one would be that surprised. The real monster in this story is the "fear" Amara felt emotionally and later physically. The "Wolf", he's the hero and has been from the time he saved Amara on the cliff tops. I wish you luck with the contest. A great first contest entry. Now get back to work on "To Love A Were" hehe he

This is one of the best stories I have read. Really enjoyed reading it. Well Done.

I dont usually comment on storys. I read them, then move on to the next. This was amazing, it made me smile, I had to comment on it. It was so great! Good job!

Perfect for Valentines day! Wishing there could be a follow up to their story!

Thank you for sharing!

I wished that it was longer.... this really surpasses all your other stories! Bravo! And yes, I think I agree with the others that another 7 pages won't hurt! It's such a refreshing take on romance.

Thank you so much for writing this! It was totally an amazing read! Love is truly blind indeed... nice.

Thankyou for this wonderful story that was a true pleasure to read. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

I've been following TLAW and followed the link to your blog where I got a little taste of what I thought would be your next novella. . . What a wonderful surprise! You are fast becoming one of my favorite writers! PLEASE keep up the delightful work!

I liked it. It had an abrupt beginning and I wish it had started with a little more detail... but it picked up by the second page and was lovely after that. Nice job!

I loved this story so much and I want to see what happens next.

It was an awesome story but way too long. I do agree that I would love to read more about these characters. Good luck in the contest.

Truly an amazing story! This is the best story I've ever read on here. You have such a great talent for writing. I loved this story. Excellent characters, excellent storyline. I would love to read more about these characters, and I'm looking forward to reading your other work as well. Please, please keep up the excellent work and continue writing!!

This... is super sweet!!! I think I almost forgot for a moment that Wade was a wolf. The plot is simple but you really made me fall deep for the characters. Gotta say you're really good at this writing thing. =)

i REALLY liked it, and it was just so sweet, and funny. I love Wade, and Amara, their having a baby awww! this was so good, and i cant wait for the next chapter in into the vampire lair, hope you update soon!!! :D

Just the total absence of disability fail would have made me happy enough. I especially loved the scene where Wade started deliberately trying to run into things just to panic people. :D

I liked his patience with Amara from beginning to end, and found both of them charming. I enjoyed her realization that love is not simply what you do for another, but who you are to them.

I loved this story. Its one of the best that Ive read so far. Excellent work!

I don't know how the contests on this site work but I hope you won. This is one of very few stories on this site that I have read twice. And I've read a lot of stories on this site. Great work.

This is the BEST story i have EVER read on this site, absolutely brillant loved it

Jorjiah xxx

Simply superb and totally engrossing, keep up the good work

If you wrote books, I would undoubtably buy them. You portray your character's personaloties so well and I love their witty comments. I hope you keep writing, you are now one of my favorites on this site.

I absolutely loved this story :)

I went from this sucks on one page to crying at the end...I wish I would have found this story for vd day and hoped for you to win

This was a rollercoaster reading, but nice...sweet. The bastard and his bitch wife took the cake, frosting,and the damn candles!!!!! So pissy. They sounded like that couple in "Who's Afraid of Virginia Wolfe". Really vicious and deserving of each other. I was pleased Amara came to her senses. She possessed real "sistah" energy.

But I truly believe this is one of the best stories I have read on this site. It was truly amazing.

even during the sour parts of the story.

This here folks, is a great story in structure,plot construction, character description, et al.

'ArtForm' is a great author;many a times I thought I was into a well written paranormal romance novel.....................It had the right kind of pace, plot details considering its a short story..............U r so going to my favourite author list ArtForm.................keep it going.

I was so impressed .....it was beautiful ...really beautiful .......I was crying and smiling .....you are one great author !!! The editing was great too , no awkward pause trying to figure out what was meant ........Thank you thank you thank you!!!

Stephen J

I have read all your stories, with this being the last one and I LOVED IT. Is it possible for you yo make another story to connect this one and the other ones? That would be awesome, I can see all these as movies lol, they are that good. Please continue writing

Great story!

Your characters didn't stay true to form. Engaging plot, you could have added more substance to the conflict with the jilted lover, it was rather anti-climatic

Well done. Just wish Wade would have had a chance to take care of Jason. Had to chuckle when the wolf got his dog knot stuck in Amara.