All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 03'

I love this story , keep going keep up the good work !!!!!!!! I hope she starts to accept it though like I want to see them develop together .

I keep waiting for the next chapter. Your story telling is very good. I am enjoying a lot. Just one thing is bugging me. If they might be wolves then why are you referring to them as a clan? Cause a clan are for bears and a pack are wolves. Just curious. Please keep them coming.

It has improved since you first started, and hopefully it will continue to do so. Keep up the good work...

Sometimes it’s hard to differentiate between things that you as an individual know and things that are common knowledge/ widely known. As we stride purposefully/ shamble through life we pick up random knowledge (Mine is definitely the 2nd one). Anyone who’s ever read any fantasy books will be familiar with the terms Alpha and Luna some might not know the exact definitions, but enough to know that Alpha is the first/ group leader and that Luna is something to do with the moon. Americans possibly more so than some other nationalities, President = Alpha and Luna = 1st Lady.

(The urge to start mocking political figures is hard to resist but we Brits aren’t doing so well either. With the not so stereotypical British name of “Boris” 🙄Who knew that men could look ditzy). Even the snippets of Latin are ridiculously easy to translate “mea vita” my life, that said you lost me with “Bellula“ unless it just means beautiful or is a pet name he likes?

What I’m trying to get across is that surely by now anyone in her situation would have at least thought the words ; “Alpha...Luna...Bond...Wolves...hidden community ..... naked people looking relaxed in icy temperatures..... natural lie detector.....FML did I just get kidnapped into a werewolf story.....shiiiiiiit??”

I hope that doesn’t seem to negative because I am enjoying your story.