All Comments on 'Apprehended Ch. 04'

My mind is blown !!!!!! I swear i thought he was going to say vampire .... I love this story keep up the good work !!!!

This is such a good story, so very mesmerizing. Each chapter only draws the reader in further... Awesome. Please write more soon. Thank you, I appreciate your talent.

More please this is amazing.

Your comment was shown in the Public Comments Portal and attracted me to this story. It's not my usual area of interest, but I went back and read the earlier chapters and thought they were interesting and well well written.

So, congratulations, Annie, on creating and submitting your story.

Lue

Amazing story, I can't wait for the next chapters 😍😍

Can’t wait for the next chapter

A bit predictable, but definitely absorbing. I'm glad you are putting the chapters out quickly. More, please!

You are such an engaging writer and I am obsessed with these characters! Please more!!

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Im loving this stort and keep obsessively checking for updates!!!! Please do one soon!

Thank you guys! Your feedback is appreciated. I just published Chapter five. It is now pending. It takes about a week. Sorry for the delay. I had a lot of homework this week. I am going to work on six when I can. Hopefully, I can have it uploaded by the end of this week. I'll write when I am able. You guys are the best. I do it for you.

Annie

This is unlike anything I've read on Literotica, but it is very, very good. I am so happy to see that you will publish more!

Amazing story! Literally just comming on now just to see if u posted ch5 now.haha