by Midnight Secret
It takes a really intelligent person to write a story that good. I enjoyed the whole thing. I especially liked the part when they were talking about religion. Brilliant.
only a truely great writer could create such a wonderfully developed story in only a few chapters. a great story please write more!
Descriptive? Yes. Imaginative? Yes. Erotic? Yes. What is it lacking? It lacks a sequel. Such a great story demands a second chapter to match the first. Thanks. It was great.