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Click here"Turn around and lean against the wall," Nicki said, her arousal keen and alive from the trance like experience of their union of souls. She turn the shower off as she soaped every part of April's body. Her sexual need had grown to an intensity that demanded that she possess every inch of April's body. She forced April's feet apart, and spread wide April surrendered to her in that shower in Cancun. April had never experienced a finger in her ass, but as Nicki pleasured her she wondered why she had waited so long for it. It came natural to rock back in rhythm with Nicki and lay her face on the shower wall.
But Nicki needed more, she needed to finally explore the new April. So with one hand still occupied with the perfect virginal butt, Nicki slipped the other hand around April's waist to cup her new fulfillment of womanhood. It was easier now to control April's movements, with one hand from behind and the other from the front, Nicki controlled and explored April in a way that made it clear that she was indeed the boss...at least in this moment!
No words were said, it was an animalistic need they shared. A need to let go and indulge the hungry lust that had been pushed back for so long. That need built to a frenzy that might have frightened an onlooker, but the two lovers were attuned and understood the mutual need to break down every wall of restraint that had kept them from this union.
"It's time to go to the bed," Nicki finally said in a voice that conveyed her need.
April felt like she was in a story book as Nicki toweled her dry and then led her by the hand to their bed. It was their bed, she said again to herself...no words had ever sounded sweeter.
Nicki was possessive, but gentle, as she arranged April onto her back. Finally April could lay naked and totally exposed without shame as Nicki stood at the side of the bed looking down on her.
"You are the most beautiful and perfect woman I have ever seen," she said, and then knelt a knee on the bed as she bent to kiss April's lips. The tender kiss quickly turned more urgent and April pulled her tighter. When Nicki's kisses traced downward to her shoulder, April broke and said in a pleading voice of near desperation, "Eat me...please eat my pussy...it's been so long!" The truth of her breaking point was made clear when Nicki felt April's hands pushing her down to the hungry need between her legs.
April spread herself for her lover, and gasped as she felt Nicki's lips kiss her...then it began in earnest! Nicki was as ready as April for this moment...this culmination of everything they had waited for. Her tongue found the opening and snuck as far inside as possible...again and again she probed her lover's body. Then it was time to show April the full joys of womanhood as she teased and tormented the sensitive button in a way that confirmed to April in a way that surpassed all others that she was all woman...she was finished! The cry of release that escaped from April's mouth was a joy to hear. That cry slammed closed the door to the past and broke open the door into the new life that she and Nicki had dreamed of for so long!
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Perhaps this could have all been accomplished at home in Astoria. But Nicki had been right, this exotic place provided a setting worthy of the love they had worked and cried over. How many people have to endure the hardships April and Nicki had overcome to finally rest in love? Their story is a story of heroes...but the heroes will go their way unknown. But they will both remember on every first day in April how blessed they are to have overcome all to find a love strong enough to see them to their final days. THE END
*****
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoA really great, sensual story. The love between Nicki and April seems so real. Definitely brought the characters to life.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI agree that it wouldn't necessarily just be accepted, however being that she supposedly knew about trans people before, the transphobia, especially around the "con artist" part, was ignorant at best. I also can believe that April might not have wanted to use her penis, but they way it came across was that Niki didn't think trans women were women unless they have had bottom surgery
yukonnightsabout 2 years agoAuthorI just dropped in to read the most recent comment on this story. In reading that one, I read the others again and really appreciate the many comments of conformation that April's lesbian lover's reaction to the shower scene is portrayed in the most believable/logical way. I have always been confused by those reader's responses who thought a lesbian who thought she was in a relationship with a woman would just roll over and accept that her lover had a cock? IMO, that's the unbelievable response. Anyway, a big thank-you to everyone who read and commented. ~ yukonnights
Anonymousabout 2 years agoFigured I’d give my two cents as a trans woman myself.
The story was very well written. It had an authentic interaction between the characters and the dialogue was pretty natural. Some of the others didn’t like how Nicky was transphobic, but as a trans woman it seemed to be the reaction I’d expect unfortunately. So you did a good job authentically in that aspect, as admittedly depressing as it was.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoHello, I have read both your stories and really like both of them. I like the way you built up the "scene" for the Grand Finale. I like to write erotic stories myself, but you are at least one og two levels above me.
I called my comment "A very different approach" and by that I mean that I have never read a "plot" like this before. But it works for me.
Where some comments do not like Nicki´s reaction, I think that I kind of understand it - but then again, I´m only a man :-)
I´m looking forward to read stories from your hand again.
K.R. Henning from Denmark
TaricJonalmost 4 years agoyukon,
Really beautiful story. I truly enjoyed reading it. You have a great narrative style.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI have to agree with the other anonymous comment. I was enjoying the story up until the point of Nicki's reaction, it completely took me out of it. A trans woman isn't a man just because she hasn't had bottom surgery, and being trans isn't "conning" your partner. Also, April forgave her way too easily. Nicki basically implied she was a man pretending to be a woman so she could trick Nicki into sleeping with her, that's pretty impossible to forgive in my opinion, let alone that quickly.
yukonnightsover 4 years agoAuthorDear Anonymous below; Sorry you didn't find Nicky's reaction meeting your expectations. I'll try to clarify my reasoning; Most readers have grasped that a confirmed lesbian dominant like Nicky would, in fact, be very upset to suddenly find she had been falling in love with a male in transition. Simply because Nicky is part of the larger LGBTQ community, does not equate to her giving much thought to transgender issues. She's into other women. Also, her reaction was one of 'speaking without taking a moment to calm down'...a thing that most often leads to regret. And Nicky did come to regret her behavior after she had time to process and calm down. We all have very different personalities, and you said yourself that you were waiting for April to 'come out of be found out' so Nicky could tell her everything would be alright. But that's not the Nicky in this story — she's incensed at being 'played', all of her trust had been betrayed. Those are legitimate reactions, and more likely to occur than for her to smile and cuddle the person she views as a man in her bathroom. We'd all like to live in a world where your story is the way it always happens, but we don't. That would be a fairy tale I think.
I doubt you'll be back to read my thoughts on your comment. But, I really do appreciate the time, thought and effort you gave to share how the story spoke to you. Every comment helps me going forward ~ yukonnights
Anonymousover 4 years agoI thought the beginning of this comic was beautifully written, and I was so waiting for April to come out or potentially be discovered accidentally and have Nicky tell her that everything is going to be ok, that she loves her no matter what, and that being trans doesn’t make her less of a woman or less desirable. That she isn’t “unfinished”. I was waiting for them to hug and kiss and allay all each others fears.
But that didn’t happen AT ALL. I’m not saying that every sappy story has to be smiles 100% of the time. But it felt so much that Nicky’s reaction to finding out that her crush was trans, her crush that she hadn’t yet really confessed to, that she had been lusting over for a while, that she bought a necklace for, *whose breasts she just played with!*
It felt so much like that reaction was out of character for her. I honestly didn’t believe it. 2 sentences in I fully understood that April was dreaming, and that these were her worst fears, to be contrasted with how actual adult human beings interact towards people they love - with care and acceptance and patience.
Dude, she didn’t even for a second let April explain herself. She jumped straight to being *offended* at who April was. Calling her nasty things, and immediately being a transphobic bitch.
But despite all her rampant transphobia, she gets redeemed so so soon after. I couldn’t get over this. This is the last place that I thought this otherwise wonderful story would go. 0 stars if I could, sorry :/
