All Comments on 'April Fool - No Longer'

Good One !

Great short BTB Story. 5 stars

Excellent, why no stars? to click?

5 star BTB!

I would have given it a 5 but there was not a place to vote.

I like it but can't vote, sorry

Perfect

Far too short, there's so much more story to be told. It's a clever story and well done.

Short, sweet, to the point and FUNNY! I would give it 5 stars but.... can't.

I would very much like to give this 5 stars. Can't. No stars to vote with.

Amusing! Well done, FULL FIVE-Stars! But as the voting stars are MISSING, I think that LITEROTICA.com will have transcribe them in from the comments boxes, probably plus an extra 100 - 200% correctional adjustment?

Or were the missing stars the April-Fool joke-of-the-Day?

Another great 750 word bitch burning. It’s past time for Scorpio to write again.

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What a bitch!!! It couldn't have happened to a nicer person!!!

I like it!!

Maybe the best 750 word project I've ever read. Blunt and in your face, just as it should be. Strike fast and cut deep. End her without the B.S of "we can work it out ". You can't. Move along, nothing is left.

Nothing special, but at least it was different. If i had been allowed i would have given it 4*

6******, Hooyah, Salutes so very original and profound. Ya did real good with on this one; and you got her to willfully confess over her social media - outstanding!!!

Such a great premise, you could have hit this out of the ball park with your creativity. Sadly you chose a fast easy ending. You are better than this story.

Yep!

@ANON: While I always appreciate comments, I have to point out the story beginning. Perhaps you missed that warning.

"This is a 750-word story."

The 750-word story exercise is an annual event on Literotica where authors write stories (164 last time) around with EXACTLY 750 words. Could I have done more, sure, but not with 750 words. It wasn't a fast easy ending; it was the ending that fits into a limited format.

You must begin, set the scene and write a credible ending, all within 750 words. It helps to make your writing more concise in that you start to realize when you're getting wordy. I encourage you to try it if you write at all. It's an excellent exercise, and I quite enjoy the challenge.

I'd like to think that the creativity and story quality was excellent considering the limitations. Many others have thought so. But thank you for your "creativity" and "I'm better than this" comment. I liked that part. 😀

Love it.

Always look under the bed you never know what you may find. Excellent story with so few words.

Not usually a fan of the 750 word thing but this one is excellent. Well done.

Really enjoyed this quickie. I've only recently found your stories, Hidden Boss and Homeless, and I enjoyed them immensely. I'll definitely be reading more of them!

Oh that was good! LMAO. Thanks

Really good and original.

No doubt: 5*

Fabulous read

Still funny

Yep. D

That was a well done 5.

Can I vote 5 twice ? Just excellent ! ! !

No voting stars present. I would have given it five stars.

LOL better than 5 stars

No fair! I want to give it 5 stars but I can't.

super stat writer

How do we rate this? Short and fun

5 stars

Oh, VERY clever!

5 Stars on a great Story . Heck I thought I did good sending pictures and a video to my ex's family

Short sweet and to the point. Great story

Great story, very different. Just one little gripe that the author might think about. I can't believe that a cheating wife would become a bitch overnight because of her cheating, slightly different behaviour, yes, daydreaming, yes, guilt feelings, yes, being over affectionate, yes, a birch I doubt it. I was cheated on by only my second serious boyfriend, but he was never anything but nice. It's amazing how many lit author's call into this trap, writing in the LW section. Sorry could only give 4*

:) :) :)

To Helen 1899- I know all people react differently when they are cheating. But it is very common, with wives who are doing this to lose all respect for their husband, and start to treat him like shit. I believe it is the same defense mechanism women use, when they are dumped, and don’t want to let another man close to them. Sometimes this attitude is exacerbated when the husband points out to the wife how she is changing. For instance, if their sex life is suffering( as it usually does) , she will blame it on him, to deflect the guilt she is feeling. I believe it is not unlike a drug addict who is constantly lying to his family about it. Eventually, it will destroy their relationship with the spouse, and family. 5 stars.

The joke's on her!

5

Ouch! That’s cold! But not nearly as cold as her cheating on him with his best friend.

Short, sweet, and well done.

Thank you for your kind comment. 😁

Always on the search for new and clever plots. You nailed it sir.

Good story. Would live to read the aftermath.

Excellent

Hah! Thanks

Ooh that was inventively funny clever and wicked. Loved it BardnotBard

Very clever...

Hahaha! Highly-amusing nonsense, well-done, I really enjoyed it!

DO keep writing or, should I just say "keep your end up"!

R.S.

Short, sweet and FUNNY! 5 stars. DMW aka Sumnut96

Thanks, Gordo, I love it. Short, sweet, and Bam!

Busted and served in one fell swoop. Ya gotta love it. Thanks for sharing.

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GREAT!!!!!!! You did good man. Loved it

great idea I wish I'd thought of it a long time ago. eh Theresa or is it Ann now :-))

Wicked cruel. (But effective?)

Good one!! Thanks for a fun read!!

Nice! Funny! 5 stars.

Cute -- 5*; shows that a story doesn't have to be long to be good. No more words would have made it any better.

Would have liked for this one to have been fleshed out more.

@Anon: "Would have liked for this one to have been fleshed out more."

I appreciate your comment, but the rules of the 750 events call for 750 words. Period. (Some wiggle room because different software programs count words differently)

I couldn't flesh it out anymore. Sorry.

I guess a lot of readers don't understand the reasoning behind the Author's 750 event. 750 is the minimum amount of words that Literotica will accept for a story. It evolved from there as an exercise in writing. Writing has to be precise and taut with no wasted words yet get your story across. It teaches you something. Authors have a tendency to be too wordy and need to learn the skills of doing more with less. Try it sometime and see how you do! 😁

Brilliantly played by the husband.

Sweet, no delay for agonizing months or years.

A little far fetched but a fun read!!!

Short but powerful.

Remember this is make-believe, so don't insult the author by complaining about flaws.

Nice job!

SHORT but well lined to the point.