All Comments on 'April Fool - No Longer'

SHORT but well lined to the point.

Nice job!

Short but powerful.

Remember this is make-believe, so don't insult the author by complaining about flaws.

A little far fetched but a fun read!!!

Sweet, no delay for agonizing months or years.

Brilliantly played by the husband.

@Anon: "Would have liked for this one to have been fleshed out more."

I appreciate your comment, but the rules of the 750 events call for 750 words. Period. (Some wiggle room because different software programs count words differently)

I couldn't flesh it out anymore. Sorry.

I guess a lot of readers don't understand the reasoning behind the Author's 750 event. 750 is the minimum amount of words that Literotica will accept for a story. It evolved from there as an exercise in writing. Writing has to be precise and taut with no wasted words yet get your story across. It teaches you something. Authors have a tendency to be too wordy and need to learn the skills of doing more with less. Try it sometime and see how you do! 😁

Would have liked for this one to have been fleshed out more.

Cute -- 5*; shows that a story doesn't have to be long to be good. No more words would have made it any better.

Nice! Funny! 5 stars.

Good one!! Thanks for a fun read!!

Wicked cruel. (But effective?)

great idea I wish I'd thought of it a long time ago. eh Theresa or is it Ann now :-))

GREAT!!!!!!! You did good man. Loved it

Thanks, Gordo, I love it. Short, sweet, and Bam!

Busted and served in one fell swoop. Ya gotta love it. Thanks for sharing.

5 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Short, sweet and FUNNY! 5 stars. DMW aka Sumnut96

Hahaha! Highly-amusing nonsense, well-done, I really enjoyed it!

DO keep writing or, should I just say "keep your end up"!

R.S.

Very clever...

Ooh that was inventively funny clever and wicked. Loved it BardnotBard

Hah! Thanks

Excellent

Good story. Would live to read the aftermath.

Always on the search for new and clever plots. You nailed it sir.

Thank you for your kind comment. 😁

Ouch! That’s cold! But not nearly as cold as her cheating on him with his best friend.

Short, sweet, and well done.

The joke's on her!

5

To Helen 1899- I know all people react differently when they are cheating. But it is very common, with wives who are doing this to lose all respect for their husband, and start to treat him like shit. I believe it is the same defense mechanism women use, when they are dumped, and don’t want to let another man close to them. Sometimes this attitude is exacerbated when the husband points out to the wife how she is changing. For instance, if their sex life is suffering( as it usually does) , she will blame it on him, to deflect the guilt she is feeling. I believe it is not unlike a drug addict who is constantly lying to his family about it. Eventually, it will destroy their relationship with the spouse, and family. 5 stars.

:) :) :)

Great story, very different. Just one little gripe that the author might think about. I can't believe that a cheating wife would become a bitch overnight because of her cheating, slightly different behaviour, yes, daydreaming, yes, guilt feelings, yes, being over affectionate, yes, a birch I doubt it. I was cheated on by only my second serious boyfriend, but he was never anything but nice. It's amazing how many lit author's call into this trap, writing in the LW section. Sorry could only give 4*

Short sweet and to the point. Great story

5 Stars on a great Story . Heck I thought I did good sending pictures and a video to my ex's family

Oh, VERY clever!

5 stars

How do we rate this? Short and fun

super stat writer

No fair! I want to give it 5 stars but I can't.

LOL better than 5 stars

No voting stars present. I would have given it five stars.

Can I vote 5 twice ? Just excellent ! ! !

That was a well done 5.

Yep. D

Still funny

Fabulous read

No doubt: 5*

Really good and original.

Oh that was good! LMAO. Thanks

Really enjoyed this quickie. I've only recently found your stories, Hidden Boss and Homeless, and I enjoyed them immensely. I'll definitely be reading more of them!

Not usually a fan of the 750 word thing but this one is excellent. Well done.

Always look under the bed you never know what you may find. Excellent story with so few words.

Love it.

@ANON: While I always appreciate comments, I have to point out the story beginning. Perhaps you missed that warning.

"This is a 750-word story."

The 750-word story exercise is an annual event on Literotica where authors write stories (164 last time) around with EXACTLY 750 words. Could I have done more, sure, but not with 750 words. It wasn't a fast easy ending; it was the ending that fits into a limited format.

You must begin, set the scene and write a credible ending, all within 750 words. It helps to make your writing more concise in that you start to realize when you're getting wordy. I encourage you to try it if you write at all. It's an excellent exercise, and I quite enjoy the challenge.

I'd like to think that the creativity and story quality was excellent considering the limitations. Many others have thought so. But thank you for your "creativity" and "I'm better than this" comment. I liked that part. 😀

Yep!

Such a great premise, you could have hit this out of the ball park with your creativity. Sadly you chose a fast easy ending. You are better than this story.

6******, Hooyah, Salutes so very original and profound. Ya did real good with on this one; and you got her to willfully confess over her social media - outstanding!!!

Nothing special, but at least it was different. If i had been allowed i would have given it 4*

Maybe the best 750 word project I've ever read. Blunt and in your face, just as it should be. Strike fast and cut deep. End her without the B.S of "we can work it out ". You can't. Move along, nothing is left.

I like it!!

What a bitch!!! It couldn't have happened to a nicer person!!!

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ☀☀☀☀☀

Another great 750 word bitch burning. It’s past time for Scorpio to write again.

Or were the missing stars the April-Fool joke-of-the-Day?

Amusing! Well done, FULL FIVE-Stars! But as the voting stars are MISSING, I think that LITEROTICA.com will have transcribe them in from the comments boxes, probably plus an extra 100 - 200% correctional adjustment?

I would very much like to give this 5 stars. Can't. No stars to vote with.

Short, sweet, to the point and FUNNY! I would give it 5 stars but.... can't.

Far too short, there's so much more story to be told. It's a clever story and well done.

Perfect

I like it but can't vote, sorry

I would have given it a 5 but there was not a place to vote.

5 star BTB!

Excellent, why no stars? to click?

Great short BTB Story. 5 stars

Good One !

Good one!

Wish it had been longer, good plot and well moved. A joy to read, thank you.

Definitely 5 stars in many ways:

Fast BTB. No ado or too much explanation... just a backstabbing bitch who got caught and burned.

original idea. At least until now, I hadn't read anything like it.

Despite being very fanciful in the arrangements for the "prank", I liked the way it unfolded and the plot set up.

The icing on the cake: her confessing, unknowingly, to family, friends, and all of Facebook.

Great job. Too bad I can't have a vote. But that's just my opinion.

Why no voting, definitely worth 5 stars

loved it. perfect 750 word challenge

5 stars if they were available to click on.

Jut absolutely great!

Great story, loved it.

Short, sweet, and very much to the point. 5 star rating!

Yeah, sorry about that. It was getting hit by a troll and the score driven down. So I locked it. But I'll take your vote in spirit! 😊

Would vote 5* but voting seems to be turned off.

Great, and a 5* effort, for sure!

Excellent!

Great short story.

Short. Sweet. Awesome

Well, that was BeaUtiful!!!

Shazaam!!!!!!!!!

Just one of the best 750 word gems around!

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5*****

Yeah

Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha

Excellant!!

Perfect

Still enjoying

Fast as Hell

That was sorta fun.

I liked ut

Translation for anyone interested:

Anonymousabout 8 hours ago

Szavazni nem tudunk,mert nincsenek csillagok,de 4 csillag

...csak azért 4 mert a véáge kissé összecsapott...

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Anonymousabout 8 hours ago

‎We can't vote because there are no stars, but 4 stars‎

‎... It's only because his vera has clashed a little...‎

...csak azért 4 mert a véáge kissé összecsapott...

Another one bites the dust!

I doubt it was for the narrator. As Sheldon said on The Big Bang Theory, "Payback really is the B-word."