All Comments on 'April Fools Daddy'

You fooled me, too. Great buildup and reveal!

Great story with a nice twist. Even with the title, I was still surprised.

Really well written, as always.

Good luck in the contest!

Classic, loved it. Even the ending. It got me thinking about how i leave everything up on my PC. Mind you I am the only one who uses it these days. But you never know.

5 +++++

Good twist.

You’re right. The title did say it. Nice double twist at the end.

While I do like to have some sex in the story, even humorous ones like this, this was funny as hell. She got him good...or did she? 5/5 stars from me for a delightfully funny story. Good luck in the contest.

Dewey Cheatham

YEAH. WHAT THEY SAID ALREADY.

Combines voyeurism, exhibitionism, and incestual urges for an outstanding short story.

Good on you, Mate!

More please.

MLJ

First 5 star rating for a story that didn't include sex. Enjoyed it.

Very fun. I’ve had fantasies of being an online “Honey Bee”.

Great storyline, different than the usual. Exotic with hint of kinky.

Wow!!! This is what I went through with my daughter, only it wasn't April fools, it was real.

We talked about it and how we both felt. We now have live shows and a great relationship with each other.

You mean we should have seen it cumming ;)

Clever, well done.

Chapter 2 where she becomes daddy’s personal honeybee

Most Excellent !! Loved it!! Great break from the "norm"

5 stars

good twist ending.

should have a sequel , where he cant stop thinking about April and she does become his Bee when mother isnt around

Damn so many deranged twists. Andrew will never sleep again this.

Sorry for the typo- I meant to say Andrew will never sleep again after this. Also, want to add: The mind game that his daughter used to teach him a lesson truly makes this a captivating tale. This was brilliantly written and deserves no less than a 6...no wait...5 outta 5.

Bruh, actually got completely trolled throughout this story.

too short. feels like an intro.

Fun, playful and great April Fools story!

Great! A natural 5! She sounds so smart and so wise, she deserves more pages! Humble suggestions: a sequel; a rendez vous with the true Honey Bee and her fierce female friend, Busy Beaver; another sequel; and mom Carol, coming back with full knowledge of anything (but, how mom will react?)

Fresh, merry, talented: don't stop it now!

This was really good, and REALLY funny.

I was fooled from the start. Bravo.

Very good entry! Sexy, kinky, funny, heart stopping... I just want to know how much research into Only Fans accounts did you do for this story? ;-D

Very clever. Well done.

Clever, funny, and sexy. A perfect subject for an April Fool's story.

Ha ha! Excellent. Oh, Andrew.

Sure had me going and I didn't see that ending coming. Oh bye the way; no actual sex therefore no incest

Nice one! lol