All Comments on 'April Fools Them All'

This story was short, but very well written. The pacing was in keeping with the length of the story. I could have seen you extend this into a multi-chaptered story, but as it is, it is an excellent vignette.

Love it. Please please please write more.

didn't see the twist cumming, although 'm sure I would have luved to see her cumming.

International No Panties Day is June 22nd

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Thank you for all the kind comments on my very first story, I am pleased that you liked it. I do plan on writing more and am hoping to have one for all of the holiday competitions before I move on to a long, multi-chaptered story as suggested.

I must confess that I was completely unaware that there was already an International No Panties Day and appreciate To0Cr0ws pointing it out. Let's just say that this is just another April Fools prank.

If this is your first story then congratulations! You started out with a bang! (Pun intended). There's no reason to drag out a story if it can be told on one sitting. Now if you wanted to put the narrator through the wringer or add complicating elements then a longer format is necessary. But you probably knew that.

R.

how can whore story be a Romance??? she is out for love with the boss and getting the shit fucked out of her by a scum bag...SICK story 1 star OK. it also just an Erotic Couplings story and still a 1 star

whore story, make an Erotic Coupling story look like true love. sick...

A male Union member can't sexually harass a female member especially at work. The guy would be immediately fired and the union would be helping the business owner with the firing. Unions do not allow sexual harrassment of their members.

Me, I’d of stopped proposing to her after a few time. Told her to find a place of her own, and moved on with my life.