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Click hereWhen she did, he kissed her lips passionately yet slowly, both still breathing heavily into the others' mouths. She reached up with her left hand while she turned a little on her side then wrapped her hand behind his neck.
Wiping the damp hair away from her forehead, he wiped the tears with his thumb. "Why are you crying?"
Taking shorter, deeper breaths to slow her rapidly beating heart, she replied, "I honestly don't know."
"Was I that bad?" he asked.
Her eyes flew open and she looked at him apologetically, until she saw the playfulness in his eyes. "Yes, you were truly ... awful."
He chuckled. "That, my dear, is sooo going to cost you! Cuddle."
Smiling, she threw her leg over his thigh, put her arm over his stomach and laid her head in the crook of his arm.
"Again, nice try. Hold my cock too."
She looked at him sharply. "H uh?"
He took her left hand and pulled it down to his cock. "Hold onto my cock and do not let go."
"Oh." A moment later, she commented, "I thought you said Bessie would be downstairs for hours. It's only been what, three minutes?" she teased. He promptly smacked her ass. "Ow! That was so unfair!"
"No, it was not. And it must have been the fact we were doing it doggy style that set her off."
She groaned. "I highly doubt that, but it was kinda funny though, Bessie howling in time to our screams."
They lay together for several minutes before their breathing became slower and more relaxed. A sneeze then came from the foot of the bed accompanied by a gentle fart.
They both started laughing, looked at each other and in perfect unison said, "That BLOODY dog!"
- COMMENTS
Addicted2Writingabout 10 years agoAuthorChap 12 will be submitted tomorrow! I got it back from editation last weekend and now I'm home. So keep your eyes open!
Alexiscat35about 10 years agoI have totally fallen in love with this story! I anxiously check for updates. I love the whole growing relationship and I hope there'll be more sex in the coming chapters :) you're an amazing writer keep up the good work
Addicted2Writingabout 10 years agoAuthorSorry, guys. It'll be another week before I even submit chapter 12. I've hit a major writer's block and can't dig myself out.
So I'm going away for a bit on vacation this weekend. Maybe I'll get inspired somehow.
Bare with me, please. Thanks!
Addicted2Writingabout 10 years agoAuthorSorry you few anons don't like Hamish and Gayle cuddling in that position.
Master and I cuddle very well that way. We stay connected.
H & G have not fully connected yet. It is only the beginning.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoHow can one cuddle effectively whilst one is holding another one's cock? Cock-holding makes for decidedly ineffective cuddling. Just another indicator of the selfishness of he who seems to think he ought to be obeyed.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoSeriously, he needs his cock held? Whatever for? He is such a child. I really dislike him. I keep waiting for the part where he begins to change - 11 chapters in and I don't see anything promising. Somehow I think I'm going to be disappointed. I'm guessing the promised "transformation" will all be on Gayle - she'll learn to like being abused, instead of him learning what it means to be an adult in a relationship. I'm cutting my losses. The story itself gets no more of my attention. I'll check in for comments occasionally. It's a quick way to see what's going on in a story without wasting one's time in actually reading it. As you have found an appreciative audience, I don't think you'll miss me. Don't know why I feel a need to announce my departure. But, there you are. I'm going now. I'm sincerely glad you found your audience.
Addicted2Writingabout 10 years agoAuthorrofl!!! Thank was priceless!! I get so enthralled with his accent I don't even CARE what he says! I caught a radio advert today and sure enough, that was his closing line... well, it wasn't 'seed.' lol
I know it's a little lame using him, but he's as close to Hamish as I can get.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoIs the Scott's lawn company guy, hahaha. "Seed your woman, seed her!"
Addicted2Writingabout 10 years agoAuthor... I've been fighting a sinus infection the past few days so I've not been very productive with Hamish and Gayle.
I'm hoping to have the chapter submitted by Wed/Thurs, and the mods seem to be approving w/in 2-3 days.
So hang in there!
OH! And take a look at my profile for a pic of Hamish! Sorry, it's the best that I can do for a ginger haired Scottish man! lol Not bad, though. With his accent I give him an 8.
Bear with me, please.
lovelydarkroseabout 10 years agoOh please please tell me the next chapter will be out soon I love this story and can't wait to read more
