All Comments on 'Arabian Nightmare Ch. 01'

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newestclownnewestclownover 11 years ago
story time

That was so hot really did it for me

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Ugh

Horrible story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

It's pretty depraved and I wonder who is behind his being framed? i'd have liked to see him fight it a bit more. pain or not. The one thing I'd like for you to consider is that it seems you use the same phrases in every story you do. I assume it is what turns you on. I wish you'd try to differ the scenes and not just always describe it the same way. If you go back to your stories and read the sex scenes, they are almost verbatim. There are other ways u can describe the actions you like to make it sound different.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
5 stars!!

I love this story so much,its amazing.

My fav book woo far.

Write more!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Common Sense

If I found myself in the situation described, I would have elected to be the Prison Governor's personal slave; and probably enjoyed the experience. This would be the only course of action in the circumstances; goodness knows what could happen to a young chap in such a hell-hole!!!

Benzguy280Benzguy280over 7 years ago
Slave

Enjoying the story got me real horny and hot! I would be the Warden's white bitch in a heart beat.

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