by ruetheben
It's so good. I literally teared up. Everything feels so natural and domestic, but also intense and passionate. It's one of the best examples you can have of romance, but it also happens to be fucking hot. I can't believe how much I care about those characters. Also that ending send me to a new level.
Really loving this story! It's one of my favorites that I've read on here. Sincerely hoping you choose to continue on. Can't wait to find out what happens!
I read chapters 4 & 5 in an effort to analyze them to enhance the sex scenes that I write. In so doing, I so appreciate how you have multiple elements of sex the paragraphs of your sex scenes. Hot. Hot! HOT!!! sex scenes, I mean. You're a great author! Write on, my friend. Write on.
The love between them is so obvious and deep. I hope they stop resisting and give themselves over completely to what they both feel and want. They can be each others’ best friend, boyfriend and soulmate!!