All Comments on 'Arcana's Path Ch. 03'

I don’t know how you keep so many different stories going at the same time, but I am grateful. This was really good and I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks

Amazing story - fully agree with the comments below by ender2k2k

Many thanks for sharing with us.

I loved the part with the dragon shitting the wizard out, very funny, and well deserved since he tried to kill Kitty. Even being squeezed to death she wouldn't back down which was so cool. We finally get the connection between the two couples and then find out Violet is dying. Kind of a bummer but that side of the story is getting interesting now. Great work and so well written.

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Cheers

You already know that I'm one of your biggest fans. And I love this story. But this chapter found me struggling to keep it sorted out. I loved Rasputin's punishment. Having to travel the entire length of a dragon's 🐉 digestive tract is uniquely inventive. But there were times that I felt like I needed to stop reading chapter 3 and start over with chapter One to figure out what I had missed.

Don't worry about it though. It's probably my old old man memory failing to help me stay on track.