All Comments on 'Are We Who We Think We Are? Pt. 01'

couple of typos but really great

I loved it. I could totally imagine that it was me Jake was doing those things to and then when I went into Sarah's head when Jake was tormenting her I just flooded.

The scenes towards the end had me shaking. I had decided not to get myself off until the end and I am so pleased I did.

Please tell me that there will be a part 2, and 3, and 4. I want to hear about Sarah losing her butt cherry and see if her friend with the asshole boyfriend feature in the story. I have a theory.

well written and sexy, although I think he really overdid it for a first timer, it wojld be more enjoyable to be eased intobit by trying out one thing at a time, also, not fair doing the first time in the parents' house, more privacy is needed for such stuff, he really is a newbie, also, orgasm denial is a double-edged sword, I don't believe in it and hate guys who deny orgasms, come on, if you're going to treat me like that, the least you can do is make sure I get off every time to make it worth my while... So, in sum, his behaviour wasn't quite my cup of tea, but definitely well written

Pretty good! But you were correct - too wordy

I agree with the other commenters, in that it's a little unfair that everything is happening at her parent's house, and that he is overdoing it a bit and not really following good BDSM protocol. However, the category for this is noncon, so his actions are fine for now. Hopefully, he learns to be a better sir for Sarah as the story progresses. Also, orgasm denial is one of my favorite kinks, and it's very fitting for this story.

Wonderful piece of writing, looking forward to more! I bet this is based more on memory than you would like to admit, which is why things like location are not what you would actually choose? I bet the comments about too much happening and location either haven't written anything or create stuff that is so perfect in content that it is not believable. The way you write Sarah is brilliant, made me want her, to be able to experience doing those things to her. Please write more! but you might want to consider breaking it into slightly smaller chunks :D

Loved it. Especially the mild humiliation of making her do things while her parents are sleeping nearby. The good girl turned bad trope is the best. Looking forward to reading more :)

Well done, excellent story beautifully told. A great page turner.

First story I’ve loved so much that I needed to write a comment.

Beautiful written story. Great characters.

When are you going to give us part two of this?