All Comments on 'Are You My Husband? Pt. 01'

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Boyd Percy almost 2 years ago

Very interesting story! I can see how things could destroy the family.

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

This was a good story until his wife’s (totally unbelievable) suggestion that he have a baby with her sister. I’ll skip the rest of this. Happy threesomes are like unicorns. They don’t exist.

mac1729 almost 2 years ago

I am really enjoying this so far and looking forward to the next chapters

A_Bierce almost 2 years ago

Started fine, but then you had to segue into a happy threesoms fairytale. I"m disappointed, you're a better writer than that.

AnnaValley11 almost 2 years ago

I started to read this as I enjoy romances. Entertaining though this story was, I did not get the romantic pull. Let's see where you takes us next

AngelRider almost 2 years ago

Oh yeah I remember this one lol.

clearcreek almost 2 years ago

I hope they survive without killing each other with jealousness. 5

muskyboy almost 2 years ago

Good story but it doesn't feel like a romance. Kathleen's assertion that Janie is cheating during her road trips kind of haunts this story, really taking away from the romance....

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With a few exceptions, I tend to write longer stories, but that’s just my nature, I think. I’m going to try to tighten that up in the future. I know that means fewer people will read them, but I know that going in. Also, I tend to write what I know. I’ve spent a lot of time i...

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