All Comments on 'Aria - The Company's Piece of Ass Ch. 01'

by MrAssMan24

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Good start!

It just needs some editing to fix the tenses you're using. Like make it all past tense.

Overall, it's the right amount of erotica and made me wet and want more embarrassment put upon poor Aria. :)

shysuzyshysuzyover 3 years ago

Any jobs going? so wet and horny now

seekingmore75seekingmore7511 months ago

Already breathing heavy and wishing I was Aria.. it's only part 1!

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Hey everyone. Thanks for the support and feedback. I write stories meant to be in a wild lustful fictional reality and nothing more. I don't condone this actions in real life. Writing these stories is a kink for me and I'm glad others are enjoying the erotica too.