All Comments on 'Aria's Gamble Ch. 01'

wth was that

I didn't double check before it was posted but it appears the moderators moved this to the Erotic Couplings category and not the Non-Erotic or Novel story like I had tried to post it as. So my apologies for the weird story classification!

Well, I absolutely loved the first chapter. A woman that knows she is good and is willing to let others know just how good she is, even without ticking them off. I like that she is able to deliver the goods (the overnight coding) and then still 'give and take' with the clients without upsetting them with sarcasm. So refreshing to read about certain details ('smirking' and 'rolling of the eyes') that are not overdone. Don't worry too much about the categories as some chapters will roll differently as you write them.

Really enjoyed it. Different, sassy, and totally unsure where it’s going. Can’t wait to read next chapter. Thanks!

Well, I think you have created a character for the ages! Must have been so much fun writing this! A dream come through.