All Comments on 'Ariel'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great story

Thanks for sharing

cuckyboisissycuckyboisissyover 3 years ago
Another life changed......

Would luv to hear about further experiences involving others on both sides of the action...!!!

Client8Client8over 2 years ago

Good action but could've used a bit more story behind it

AgielAgielover 1 year ago

ENJOYABLE AND JUST THE RIGHT LENGTH (pun intended). You don’t expect a topping shemale to have a 5” cock but equally, unless there’s a specific reason, not 10”. So 7” to 8” was correct. You didn’t go over the top with the descriptions and I was prepared to accept the exaggeration of recovery time of both of them in the time available.

*****

Just a couple of points. He is on his stomach with his head at the end of the bed, she is standing, and she withdraws her cock from his mouth. He is then able to give a complete description of her body. Presumably he has an elastic neck. A little further on, as she is about to fuck him from behind she apparently has three hands. Sometimes the writer can be so close to the words they can’t see simple errors. I feel these points are both worth mentioning even though they didn’t affect my overall enjoyment of the story.

*****

I don’t think, unlike many stories of this type, it came across as basic porn. Well done.

ShortyMacShortyMac10 months ago

That was a freaking HOT story. I loved how our boy was taking the plunge this being his first time with a t-girl and never even being with a man before. Personally it was about a year after I first was with a guy before I met my first transgender girl. She too was a working girl. It was great being with her though not as good as the story. I still loved the story, and I have to give it a hot and hard 10 stars………. 🤤

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Curioussissy165Curioussissy1656 months ago

I loved it . I felt her dick penterating me

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