All Comments on 'Arienne at the Hot-Spring Pt. 01'

You truly are a wonderful writer, YuriJo! Your descriptions are so vivid and natural! You've crafted two very likeable characters as well! I look forward to the continuation of their co-bathing.

I like the story and were it could go in future chapters. My only complaint is how much you used she-dwarf. it's I think the first time Iv seen someone use she-dwarf to describe a female dwarf and I don't think it would have bothered me if you only used it once or twice but you used it like 20+ times you could of used female dwarf or just dwarf or even dwarfess. Hope to read more keep up the good work.

Thanks TitaniumPomeranium! Glad to know you liked it, but I agree, I did lean on that term quite a bit. I'll try to fix that in the next part, and maybe I'll revisit part one as well and try to fix it up. Thanks for the feedback!

Love to see a story with a sexy female dwarf! Thank you.