All Comments on 'Aristippus - Lauren's Story'

Very lively, warm and convincing narrative of how one enters into the trade. Loved reading it.

Wonderfully written. The initial narrative of a teenager taking up with her mother's lover seems a bit far-fetched.

Very well written with lots of little details. You obviously put a lot of work into it. I enjoyed it.

Thanks.

Other than perhaps Angie, Lauren was the most intriguing of the ladies from the Aristippus Retreat. This is a very nice job explaining her backstory and adding a lot of details that I wasn't expecting. Her mother's agreement with Eric was as surprising as it was sad; I really believed that she couldn't get off work despite what Lauren believed about her vacation time and that she was trying to save her relationship with Eric by offering a (trusted) substitute. Well, that turned out to be essentially correct but for a totally different reason!

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I recalled Lauren's initial meeting with Sean as being at a game, but this gave it a sweet excitement and energy that carried over into their relationship. Once things got rough and Lauren made her suggestion, I was glad to see it worked out for them but suspect that wouldn't be the result for many couples in similar situations. I was expecting a bit more focus on that but we already knew their relationship worked for them from the discussion in the Aristippus Retreat story, so this seemed like the right balance after all in the end. The story was well written with no significant issues noted. Great job.