All Comments on 'Armitage Family Loving Ch. 01'

Great stuff and I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I'm curious though, why do the English refer to an ass as an arse. Bloody awkward, really.

The sex is fun but why is the dialog so formal. Maybe it's a British thing but I wouldn't think language between family would be so stuffy. Love all the different sexings between friends and family.

I am really enjoying this first chapter, just erotic enough ,without being crass .I am envisioning myself in that same setup. how erotic is that --knowing that all those daughters want to please their daddy!!!!! I think its the forbidden element that I find ssooo arousing . however I can but fantasise

A Yank

Could be a great story. However the British vernacular and spelling was very distracting as to make reading this story a little difficult - Sorry, but at this point it has became such a mood killer that I finally had to give up on reading further - It would seem this just proves the old adage that we're to cultures separated by a common language . . . .