by OVERLAND
A Yank
Could be a great story. However the British vernacular and spelling was very distracting as to make reading this story a little difficult - Sorry, but at this point it has became such a mood killer that I finally had to give up on reading further - It would seem this just proves the old adage that we're to cultures separated by a common language . . . .
I am really enjoying this first chapter, just erotic enough ,without being crass .I am envisioning myself in that same setup. how erotic is that --knowing that all those daughters want to please their daddy!!!!! I think its the forbidden element that I find ssooo arousing . however I can but fantasise
The sex is fun but why is the dialog so formal. Maybe it's a British thing but I wouldn't think language between family would be so stuffy. Love all the different sexings between friends and family.
Great stuff and I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I'm curious though, why do the English refer to an ass as an arse. Bloody awkward, really.