All Comments on 'Arrival'

by Honey Bear

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Sorry, despite my pedantic nature, I hate silly criticisms and comments, but this one made me giggle, you said she could smell his colon, I think you meant cologne. one is his ass, the other his manly perfume type stuff, did make me giggle.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
truly a dummy

She smiled as she " breathed in the smell of his colon. " This is one of the funniest gaffes on the site. Or perhaps she was licking his bum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Liked it

Its a greeting I certainly wouldnt mind coming home to!

Thank you, and I encourage you to share more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
What a laugh!

"She hugs him back and smiles as she breathes in the smell of his colon."

ROFL!!!!

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