All Comments on 'Arriving Together'

Great story about two of my favorite fantasies; pregnant women & lactation. Love to see more of these. Thanks JohnBaldwin. I'm going to have to read more of your stuff.

Read a lot of your older stories. Good to see your writing again and hope to read more.

You need to do this about 3 more times! Because this couple should get married and have have a few more kids. Then we can see their exclusive babymaking adventures, and pregnancy and lactating adventures. Breast feeding and fucking in interesting places! That's what I hope anyway.

Good premise.

But sex, when it happens, moves ahead much too fast.

It's as if there's a deadline that has to be met to arrive at the end of the story.

Needed much more in the way of prelimiaries. More admiring her tits. More dialog about how much he liked them. What would he like to do to/with them? Removing her bra. Playing with them. Her reaction to his playing. Her telling/asking/begging him to lick the drop of milk.

And so on. Step by step. Slow steps before moving on.

Four stars.

Unexpectedly sweet and romantic.