by MFFM
A new and strong way
to show the emotions of a break up.
Great idea and well executed.
Top ratings from me.
Stay....marry.... man up for the woman who loves you!!
Will she (secretly) fly out and model for your art classes there??
She is showing love to you like only the unconditional love of a puppy can show. Don't let her get away.
5/5
If this was real life be glad he broke up with her.
Using sex as a weapon is wrong.
As a tale I felt this was very blah. The words were kind of there but not feeling the emotion taht should have been there.