All Comments on 'Artist Ch. 03'

This story is so beautiful. Please hurry and submit the next chapter.

It's just lovely ... but there are more mysteries about Marie to be explored. Next time?

Great story in itself, sexy yet tender. I liked how she ends it with a lead-in to the next chapter.

Your writing definetly had me in the room with them. Many, many thanks. Top score!

it seems a great pity to stop here...

How Dare You End The Chapter At Such A Sexciting Hi - Point Of The Story !

It's Like You've Gotten Out Of The Bed Before Sexual Bliss Has Been Reached. I Know I Haven't.

More Please !

Kisses

Ahhh....Don't....Stop......!! You MUST finish the story!

I'm speechless!! I refuse to read anymore of your stories until you finish this one!

pleaseandthankyou

:-)

More please!

Is the rest? You have an amazing writing style and I love all your stories! I can't wait for you to post more stories and especially the next chapter of this series. Very excited and impatiently waiting!!

Incredebly erotic and making me dream…

You have such a wonderfully erotic mind xxxxxxxx

The details, emotions and physical descriptions in your story are incredible... You truly are an artist yourself...

Wonderfully tender - but I'm left with a feeling that the story is as yet incomplete. Plese lt there be more...

Perfection! Absolute perfection. I'm in love; but with whom I'm not sure. Is it the three lovers in the story or, could it be the wonderfully creative mind of the author.

I feel like I'm left unsatisfied by my lover, I want more. For me they are the best series of stories I have read on Literotica, I was sad that I had to climax solo, I was desperate for one of them to be with me, but my climax was so intense. I found the three stories, so erotic, please write more.

I think Marie was standing there the whole time, but as I said in your last part, you should have had her not be married and Marie as well

Great stories, thank you so much for sharing! They may be vanilla but the beauty is in the build-up and in the detail. It's hard to believe that you have so little real life experience with women! It really sounds like something you have actually experienced!

Eszter

Wonderful pacing, exquisite description of lovemaking and sensations - then what a twist at the end! And the dramatic nature of that twist leaves me feeling that it can't be the end, that the situation requires some kind of resolution. I hope that will come...

That was an interesting cliffhanger - more than the sex (which is vividly & gently described), it's the suspense that's "living" me (not killing).

Charlotte35f, I hope all the comments you have received is enough encouragement to have you continue on with the story. Please don't leave us hanging like this.

Like others here, I wonder what happens next. Do the husbands find out? Is the infidelity replaced with openness?

How cud you leave a girl hanging!!!! Lol

Wonderfully detailed, I really enjoy your style of writing. Each of your Artist trilogy earned 5 gold stars from me and I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you.

What fabulous, detailed and sensual writing! Absolutely gorgeous! Such a shame there's no more of this marvellous story.

Sooo erotic. You must continue!

Love the way you keep dropping surprises into your stories, but most of all love the way you put your stories together so they flow effortlessly and are so readable. Beautiful writing x

Very nice!