All Comments on 'Artist Jed and his Beautiful Sister'

Nice story, well written. Maybe a second part could have Emma and Serena naked together. Maybe Jed needs a painting a picture with two naked women, for a very wealthy client!

I'm thinking you should have his sister get pregnant and then more paintings start selling with the pregnant belly showing.

Would love another chapter

I thought your story was good. It started out a little confusing, but once it became clear, it developed well. It went along well and built up to a great ending! Good work! Keep writing!

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Well thought out, well put together and well written 👍🏾

great story line please continue. maybe get a 3some with wife and sis.

just mediocre. All of it. 3*

Confusing start, very difficult to figure out what was actually happening.

I habe read several of your stories. After a few years reading literotica stories, I have finally found a favorite author.

Love the originality of your stories, they aren't the same old schtick we see so much of in this genre. But, this is a request, not a criticism, can you please fill out the sex scenes a little more. They are great, but I would prefer a little more detail and a little more description of the action. Please keep writing. This is the sixth submission of yours I have read and all have been 5 star, all enjoyable.

First class, thank you

This is so good. I like your writing style. However, I too, like Havoc100 would like to see the sex scenes with a bit more description and emotion. Other than that this is a good story.

So EROTIC!

We need MORE!

Can’t wait for the next story.