by homerdepot
I found pics of mom once, used to watch her change clothes daily, used her panties regularly but never was bold enough or brave enough to walk into her room. Finally years later I tried to show her how much I loved her for mothers day but she pushed me away.
Many mothers take an interest with the telltale signs of early masturbation and some have a fire ignited. Some lucky sons have brave mothers.
It was great until the abrupt ending. Five stars for the story content and writing style of the author, but disappointed with the ending.
I hate to point it out, but from the 2nd paragraph through the end of the sex scene on page two, the words are an
almost direct copy of pages 18 through 24 in an old Greenleaf novel, "Two Naked Hot Moms", published Jan 1984, written by Tom Allison.
I know this because I'm old and still have a copy of right here in my hands.
I do not think you need to plagiarize old sex novels. Does Literotica allow this?
It's worth shit ... no conquering the Mother... already at the hot stuff in the bathroom ... the end is shit, nice description but no logic. 1 star !
The writing style was a little kind cartoon. The exaggerated descriptions and the weird lingo like "cock sap"? Still the mothers dialog was sexy and a turn on. The story was still interesting and then the end was awful. I gave it 3 stars