All Comments on 'As Fate Would Have It Ch. 04'

by TheStarryEyedDreamer

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Itsmine2Itsmine2over 5 years ago
Final?

Final chapter? But it's not done yet.

TheStarryEyedDreamerTheStarryEyedDreamerover 5 years agoAuthor
Maybe...

I might consider writing another chapter if there is enough interest and I have some free time, I mostly just got bored with the story but maybe...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
nice erotic story dear

nice erotic story dear. I liked that you had words about condom.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Need a conclusion

You need to have a conclusion. What happens to them after coming back to London?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Definitely needs a more deeper conclusion!

This us fucked up... So much wait and build up for a fuck!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Naive

She is stupid for wanting to go clubbing in NY on her own. She for sure wouldn’t have been a virgin after that. The ending was not an ending. The story just stopped abruptly.

Dmjewels69Dmjewels69over 2 years ago

awe I know I'm here late, but I would have loved another chapter or epilogue to wrap it up. added to my favorites

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another chapter would be nice

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