All Comments on 'As God Intended'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Moar.

We need more on this!

WaldcarvWaldcarvalmost 9 years ago
Need More

Exciting story. When is the sequel coming?

zoejoeyzoejoeyalmost 9 years ago
Such a beautiful mind

Oh this is so good. Please don't be put off by the low scores. I haven't been this excited by a new story in months. Easily a five. I would love to know where this is going. Please please please please continue.

Zoe

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
An interesting life and story.

I hope I am seeing some part of the future for girl's education in time of equality and equity.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

If they're happy to be naked, you gotta let the readers know why, and if they're not happy to be naked, but got naked anyway, again, you gotta let the readers know why. If she simply gets naked without any resistance, then I really question how embarrassed she could possibly be. Because people who really don't want to do something don't just fold like that unless there's a strong compelling reason, and no such reason has been presented her. Even if we ignore the "everyone is 18+" disclaimer and read this in the context of high school setting., it still makes no sense. Also the principal came along and straight up made nudity mandatory, even with existing students? Yeah, having a real tough time buying it.

AYuriLoverAYuriLover2 months ago

This place is a breeding ground for lesbians.

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