All Comments on 'As He Was Going to St Ives Ch. 03'

good story Quinn. glad to see your back in writing form .loved the setting for this tale. this would have been so taboo in the 50s which makes the story all the better. love the wife seduceing toy boy with husbands consent stories. more of the same please

This is a terrific story very well constructed with a lovely seamless flow. A voyeurs dream. There is something about country train travel world over, where you enter a differant world, a world of anonymous people who come together, sometimes cavort and disappear forever. Your grammar and use of the right words is excellent. English erotic writing is so much better than the American style which is all earth shattering 10 inch pricks, gushing cunts millions of orgasm's etc etc. Pommy porn has more style. What a beautiful twist at the end, screams for a sequel this one. Keep up the good work regards jules, (bi-fem from Brisbane)

was I able to guess where the story was going to go. And then the conversation with his mother. Magnificent! Not only a very HOT story, but clever, amusing and, did I say it, VERY HOT!

.. with a wicked ending.

Would have made a great start to a novel, so many possibilites there.

(Well, you can dream, can't you!)

Very clever plot and ending!