All Comments on 'As It Seems Ch. 07'

I was literally just thinking about this story about a week ago and I'm so glad you updated. You did not disappoint - it was wonderful and I'm anxiously waiting for the next installment :-)

Kitty

I just spent a few hours reading all of your stories. And I absolutely can't wait to read more. More please. You have a way with words. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Your storyline has what the majority of what Literotica is missing overall: it's well thought out, has great character development--and above all--it's actually believable.

The only suggestion that I could make is to find an editor. I am a writer myself (and consider myself a damned good one), but I still need an editor to look over my work and catch small mistakes that I don't, such as changes in tense, misspellings, etc.

But by all means, finish this series; I don't get involved in to many of the stories here but this one has grabbed me; don't make us wait for another chapter.

Everyone has secrets, but does that stop you from finding, falling, and giving love? It is time for Alexa, Connor, Janabelle, and Gauge to find out!

This tangled web of people and lies is crazy